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K**T
still fun story
Also still sexist and with missing or misspelled words. There was one point where the mc’s body was referred to as muscular with sunken cheeks, then in the same or next chapter he was described as pudgy. In another chapter, he set up an array, but as the chapter continues, there was no mention of it being broken, and it didn’t seem to do what it was supposed to (trying to be vague so as to not give spoilers). It just seems like the author or editor should reread and check for continuity. I’m still going to read the next book because the story is fun.
A**R
Cultivation & a System?! Mind blown!
I love the inclusion of a system in a cultivation story.The pacing of the story is perfect. Continuous progression and experiences. The fight scenes are exciting and difficult to predict.The alchemy and array development is really interesting and adds an additional layer of progression to look forward to.
B**B
Losing me. Too much cultivation theory, not enough story line
While the story is still interesting its getting harder to read because 80% of the writing is cultivation theory mumbo jumbo, using flowery language. He jumped from layer 3 refinement cultivation level to Layer 9 qi foundation realm and was using basic sword strike and mad elephant stomp. This was against Tian Chi who was using using wood splitting sword attacks then the MC was blindsided by an artifact attack while circulating his qi under pressure from 3x gravity. Then he gets snatched away by a spirit orb. Next he has entire conversations for 10 minutes while adversarial beasts wait patiently before attacking, during which time he’s circulating his qi 9x.Nearly every character is an adversary except for the 2 women. Including his own father & members of his clan. Only is grandfather is not against him and he ignored him for years. The cultivators are all arrogant greedy jerks, looking out for number one and happy to kill or punish for breathing too close to them.The story line is being sacrificed on the alter of cultivation theory so much that its just like…. 7th level foundation realm trying to become a Bone baptism realm cultivator at the Legendary Houtain realm while using the Blood earth force divine ability. Blah blah blah blah blah!He also keeps pulling out forbidden techniques based on his past life. Ok, but the way its written and the frequency that he does this feel like a cheat.Then there’s the system. The author never mentions what the system is though its his major asset that absorbs energy, facilitates upgrades and unlocks techniques.The story is just getting difficult to read. Im done!!
M**H
good xianxia
Another fun xianxia adventure story. Some parts felt a little rushed but I liked the story and will buy the next book!
V**R
Great story, editing problems.
Just like in book one the story is good, but there are a number of editing problems. I submitted no less than 20 issues as content errors. These ranged from spelling and grammar errors to plot errors.
K**R
Brilliant
Wuxia with a difference. Mostly clean of typos and other grammar related issues that plague most of this genre. More breathtaking fighting scenes,last second saves, arrays with alchemy and cultivation progression . Need the next one please
S**N
Really Good
No spoilers.This is a really good series so far. The only real complaint is the author changes scenes with out any warming. It isn't everywhere but it is confusing.Have a great read.
K**R
Very good read
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like progression type of books
D**H
Those who read xianxia
Mixed up no clear context .It would have been better if focused was given on one thing mixed up many things.But good effort .
P**D
I couldn’t put it down
Really good. Better than book 1. I love the “system” as it introduces a bit of sci fi (another genre I like). This story is not as repetitive as other cultivation novels. The power ups flow naturally with the story line. Excellent
C**Z
Interesting take of the trope
This series is just up my street in wierd and wonderful LitRPG theme that's very very detailed (it is a bit of a criticism but that just means the author has put a lot of thought into it). The plot is a bit complicated and I feel as if things appear very rapidly from the metophorical left and right to change the direction of the story virtually from chapter to chapter. There is a big story to tell and its happening fast, not always a bad thing. I will definitely read on.
K**R
Not a bad read
Not a bad read but jumps about a bit and can get a bit confusing at times but I put this down to the translation
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